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M
1/17/18, 10:27 PM
Hot story and premise. Please, it would be cool if you continue!
nycboot
1/17/18, 10:18 PM
I love the idea. Other than stimulating Peter (no need to used trademarked characters), there is no obvious mind-control, but I would hope the symbiote would start exerting itself more strongly in future chapters. For me, the mental struggle between the symbiote and Peter would be the hot aspect of the story. (I suppose whenver the symbiote wanted its way it could resort to stimulating Peter.) Good luck.
1/17/18, 10:13 PM
Bought the book. the reality shifts were great and well described.
Swizzington
1/17/18, 9:15 PM
Interesting.
Anonymous
1/17/18, 7:05 PM
Good, but would've been better if some parts of the story weren't literally copy-pasted from the previous chapter.. :/
Anonymous
1/17/18, 5:39 PM
Phenomenal
1/17/18, 5:36 PM
It was cute. Somewhat jerky in places but I immensely enjoyed it
Anonymous
1/17/18, 4:16 PM
I can’t believe it took me until his verbal tweet to realize he was becoming Donald Trump.
1/17/18, 12:13 PM
Hey, thanks for the support, this has been an idea bouncing around for a while now. Mostly based on some of the truly terrible plots and writing that can be found. Don't know how often or fast it'll update, but I've got more ideas to get through with it.
Anonymous
1/17/18, 8:33 AM
Soooo Great as a stand-alone piece Too bad it isn't part of a series Love the concept Liked the way it's written Didn't find it that confusing Just wanted to see more 😂