Recent Comments

1/16/18, 12:33 AM
I like the premise a lot. This promises a nice combination of humor and hotness.
Anonymous
1/15/18, 11:24 PM
This needs continued.
Anonymous
1/15/18, 11:24 PM
This needs continued.
Anonymous
1/15/18, 10:57 PM
Excellent
Anonymous
1/15/18, 7:46 PM
great story, very hot! Thank you very much.
Anonymous
1/15/18, 7:24 PM
I know that you probably want to write more stories than just this one, but this one is so amazing that I check this site every day to see if it's been updated. And in case you're having writer's block or something, I have a few ideas. Maybe a girl could play, and she would slowly be turned into a guy based on the cards she got. Maybe there could be some cards that make people think they're girls and act like bimbos, etc. Possibly some foot fetish cards, because that's a pretty commin fetish. Maybe some cards that make them furries if you're into that? Or maybe just more animalistic. And also I would LOVE it and I'd rate your stories highly if there was a lot more kissing. Anyway, those are just some suggestions. I love your stories, and I'll love whatever you choose to do with it.
Swizzington
1/15/18, 4:58 PM
Nice one.
Swizzington
1/15/18, 4:45 PM
Yeah I was confused by his friend's behavior too. The whole situation just seemed so contrived. There was a point when the narrator says, "I couldn’t believe Zane was saying these things. He had been my best friend for most of our lives. How could he just be treating me like a whore now?" and I was thinking the exact same thing. There was no real explanation for why the characters would act like that. My first thought was perhaps they had been hypnotized too? But that was never made clear in the story. First, because they seemed incredibly callous towards their friend, and inexplicably happy to have gay sex in front of each other, something men are usually very inhibited about. But also because none of them spoke at all for a very large portion of the story, when in reality I would expect they would pipe up every now and then - especially when Blaze's instructions got weirder and weirder.
horologio
1/15/18, 4:32 PM
It is the supplements, yes
Anonymous
1/15/18, 4:01 PM
This could have been a series.