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Anonymous
1/14/18, 11:45 PM
Spectacular
bleuboy
1/14/18, 10:56 PM
Another good one! I got some "A Cure for Wellness" vibes from this. Did that movie inspire this in any way?
Anonymous
1/14/18, 9:26 PM
hope the slave needs to go get other slaves... to be converted
Anonymous
1/14/18, 9:26 PM
amazing. so well written, want to know more about the master and his amazing body, skin tight jeans leather and lycra
Anonymous
1/14/18, 8:58 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
1/14/18, 8:57 PM
I'm hard. Still.
Anonymous
1/14/18, 8:51 PM
More
Nocturne13
1/14/18, 8:40 PM
Too short to be good. It is solid but the story isn't developed very well. You haven't really gotten into the mind of the person being controlled and transformed. Actually there isn't a transformation in this but you know it would be great if smoking the cigar made him get a little buffer and sprout some scruff or something like that. Really turn him into a leather daddy complete with maybe some studs on the jacket and a pair of cool Aviator Shades or something like that.
1/14/18, 8:28 PM
Keep on writing the next chapter ...... soooo hot
Boon
1/14/18, 8:24 PM
Hi, M. Greene. Well, it wasn't what I expected, and I certainly thought it was going to be a longer story with more hot specific moments, but it's not a bad story at all. I always appreciate the use of debasing uniforms, the dumbing down and a change of name of the main character in a transformation/hypnosis story, especially when the new name is some sort of mock or parody of his former name. Would be nice to know Bubble's back story!