Recent Comments

Sexcrab
1/12/18, 4:26 AM
I love long stories. It's like watching a Tv series by seasons. 2 seasons Overall. When you resume this series, however, I suggest you: 1- Add new "special athletes". Everyone asks you that, okay, but I'd love to see a Lebanese stallion or a jet black stud, a black guy or a guy with long, long hair. Lots of possibilities. 2- Scenario. Now that the team is in a new league, maybe it was time for Greene to start training their "special athletes" to "serve other men"; If that does not please you (even because it's not something original) you can create complications between Greene and the powerful men of the big leagues, who want to discover the "secret of coaching by Greene". 3- Relationship. I find it interesting that, as much as coach Greene has controlled their minds, possessed their bodies and altered their personal tastes, he has maintained the essential personality of each player, which makes it all sexier. However, the couple scheme Andy and Vince / Matthew and Joseph are deeply forced to me (forced level Winx club). The only valid relationship for me is Brad and Cal. Also, Vince drastically lost his importance in the second series, as well as the relationship he had with Brad. I wish that relationship would happen again. 4- Voyeurism? I dont understand. Because Coach Greene does not take advantage of his "jock toys" enough? I want to see Greene eating Joseph's arrogant ass, or extolling Andy's oriental beauty while using his body "I.E" a greater interaction between the coach and his players. I know, you want to focus more on the interaction of the players, building a real relationship between them, but I believe you can give more evidence to coach Greene without harming the story. I hope you enjoy my suggestions. I've been loving the show so far. Thanks for the great story.
Kyle
1/12/18, 4:12 AM
Great to see another chapter. Great imagery. Evil ending to this one. Look forward to more.
Anonymous
1/12/18, 3:35 AM
Good starting
Aug 19, 2010
screamingmoist
1/12/18, 2:05 AM
Both of those are fantastic.
Dec 25, 2016
Anonymous
1/11/18, 9:57 PM
Terrific
LongtimeFan
1/11/18, 8:10 PM
Absolutely fascinating. Luke gradually turning into the stereotype of the “happy black slave” from nineteenth-century Southern fiction is equal parts creepy and sexy. Your use of dialogue is especially impressive. I love thought-provoking stories! :D
Anonymous
1/11/18, 7:57 PM
It's your story. Pace it as you want. The story has to build up.
Anonymous
1/11/18, 7:52 PM
Predictable ending.
Swizzington
1/11/18, 5:58 PM
Oh shit. This suddenly got super hot.
Indy93
1/11/18, 5:07 PM
Also, excuse my typos. Lol.