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Dec 25, 2016
Anonymous
1/11/18, 9:57 PM
Terrific
LongtimeFan
1/11/18, 8:10 PM
Absolutely fascinating. Luke gradually turning into the stereotype of the “happy black slave” from nineteenth-century Southern fiction is equal parts creepy and sexy. Your use of dialogue is especially impressive. I love thought-provoking stories! :D
Anonymous
1/11/18, 7:57 PM
It's your story. Pace it as you want. The story has to build up.
Anonymous
1/11/18, 7:52 PM
Predictable ending.
Swizzington
1/11/18, 5:58 PM
Oh shit. This suddenly got super hot.
Indy93
1/11/18, 5:07 PM
Also, excuse my typos. Lol.
Indy93
1/11/18, 4:53 PM
I appreciate th feedback! I can’t deny I can get long-winded. But I do like to wind things up a bit. Edits are never a bad thing, so I’ll what I can do with the next piece.
Anonymous
1/11/18, 4:22 PM
Loving it, and keeping the story going at a slow pace is the essence of "teasing" . . . Please, keep going. Very Hot!
Anonymous
1/11/18, 4:18 PM
(Fyi, you posted a chapter 3 times) Love this chapter, hate how humanity's needs in the form of the Divines are corruptig the SilverGod's perfect world. More please!
Anonymous
1/11/18, 4:10 PM
Super well written!