Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/11/18, 4:22 PM
Loving it, and keeping the story going at a slow pace is the essence of "teasing" . . . Please, keep going. Very Hot!
Anonymous
1/11/18, 4:18 PM
(Fyi, you posted a chapter 3 times) Love this chapter, hate how humanity's needs in the form of the Divines are corruptig the SilverGod's perfect world. More please!
Anonymous
1/11/18, 4:10 PM
Super well written!
Anonymous
1/11/18, 3:58 PM
Kinda wish it had moved along a little faster or the story was a little longer. The first part felt incomplete because there wasn't really much change and this one doesn't feel much better. It's good that we at least stay with Marcus instead of cutting away from him for a reason that's not really relevant yet. It feels like this and Part 1 should've been combined from the beginning with the cut away to Marvin happening at the end here now that Marcus is presumably going off to fuck another guy.
1/11/18, 3:56 PM
Great start - thanks!
Anonymous
1/11/18, 1:02 PM
Wow, really interesting (and great) direction to take on that first wish. Keen for more :)
Anonymous
1/11/18, 12:13 PM
Excellent start!
Chaz
1/11/18, 11:55 AM
Nice to see another story by you! looking forward to the next installment!
Nov 9, 2017
ponchodf
1/11/18, 8:02 AM
Pleas continúe the story
1/11/18, 4:29 AM
Bravo! A great series. It had everything from geeks to bikers to firemen to soldiers. I will miss this series. It was very hot.