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Anonymous
1/11/18, 3:58 PM
Kinda wish it had moved along a little faster or the story was a little longer. The first part felt incomplete because there wasn't really much change and this one doesn't feel much better. It's good that we at least stay with Marcus instead of cutting away from him for a reason that's not really relevant yet. It feels like this and Part 1 should've been combined from the beginning with the cut away to Marvin happening at the end here now that Marcus is presumably going off to fuck another guy.
1/11/18, 3:56 PM
Great start - thanks!
Anonymous
1/11/18, 1:02 PM
Wow, really interesting (and great) direction to take on that first wish. Keen for more :)
Anonymous
1/11/18, 12:13 PM
Excellent start!
Chaz
1/11/18, 11:55 AM
Nice to see another story by you! looking forward to the next installment!
Nov 9, 2017
ponchodf
1/11/18, 8:02 AM
Pleas continúe the story
1/11/18, 4:29 AM
Bravo! A great series. It had everything from geeks to bikers to firemen to soldiers. I will miss this series. It was very hot.
SlaveBoy
1/11/18, 1:50 AM
¡Me ha encantado! Una historia centrada y muy bien escrita, detallista y bien planteada. Me ha gustado mucho de veras, el cómo describes la lujuria de "macho alfa" de Vitalis... Dios... "so hot" *w* Además tienes un estilo narrativo muy claro y limpio, es muy sencillo y ameno leerte. Muy bien hecho. Espero leer más cosas tuyas pronto!!
jpoppinga
1/11/18, 1:22 AM
Found it.
jpoppinga
1/11/18, 1:21 AM
Where is chapter 4 Thanks