Recent Comments

BankStreet
1/9/18, 10:18 PM
I liked the pace. I found the story highly erotic, in a spare, minimalist way. And... yes ... the journal conceit is difficult to pull off with credibility, but ..... the whole mind-control conceit strains credibility, no? Suspension of disbelief, guys!
Aug 19, 2010
Randomguy
1/9/18, 10:05 PM
'Cause I'm very visual, I like to pretend this is Adam: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-J9kQWv2I7Ho/UFyKfw9UssI/AAAAAAAALzY/aLfmDVDvRYo/s1600/Dominik+Dornbusch_m3e21tondE1rs4ej4o1_500.jpg And this is Angel: https://orig00.deviantart.net/563d/f/2015/306/7/b/nipple_boom_by_musclesk-d9f92t1.jpg Haha, just like sharing my weird thoughts, awesome story btw
Anonymous
1/9/18, 9:33 PM
I RECOGNISE DALTON
Tox
1/9/18, 7:56 PM
Yes, all I can say is yes. This looks interesting and I can't wait to see how it continues!
Anonymous
1/9/18, 6:32 PM
Great start. Keep going!
Anonymous
1/9/18, 5:55 PM
Good start! Can't wait for the next installment.
Swizzington
1/9/18, 4:10 PM
A very intriguing beginning. It's always good to see new authors sharing their work.
MindManiac
1/9/18, 2:09 PM
Well this just made me more scarred of my bad handwritting. Please do continue
Jun 16, 2015
Anonymous
1/9/18, 12:27 PM
I would love to see what they look like after college is done
Anonymous
1/9/18, 11:58 AM
I like it. Especially Kake and Tom of Finland genre!