Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/9/18, 8:58 AM
Keep it going. Great premise!
Anonymous
1/9/18, 8:08 AM
Genius. You are the master of the dystopian perv-up
Anonymous
1/9/18, 7:15 AM
Nice start! Keen for the sequel.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
1/9/18, 5:55 AM
Have to disagree that there was very little eroticism and no sex. To me the whole thing was erotic and it was all about sex.
Anonymous
1/9/18, 4:33 AM
Awesome! Loved every chapter!
Anonymous
1/9/18, 3:56 AM
Fiendishly fun, as always!
1/9/18, 2:15 AM
Perfect! Best one yet.
Anonymous
1/9/18, 12:59 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter! :Q
Anonymous
1/9/18, 12:53 AM
No, that was rather honest. Saying that the story sucked, that would be rude. Don't stop writing --- just do a little editing, and rewriting, and editing. It's called creative writing. Create!!!
Aug 19, 2010
screamingmoist
1/9/18, 12:47 AM
Glad you enjoyed it! This whole series was super fun to write. I wouldn't be surprised if this crystal turns up again in future stories at some point.