Recent Comments

1/9/18, 12:37 AM
I just want to say thank you for reading this series. I'm sorry if I stalled between some of the chapter. So I appreciate your patience, and I can only hope that you feel rewarded with the outcome. This does conclude the story of Fusion. I don't think there's really anything more to tell regarding the Fused men. They obviously accomplished their mission, and have harvested every man on the planet. Now that they're seeking new planets to conquer, I can only hope that they create a portal that leads them to our Earth. Now wouldn't that be nice?
Anonymous
1/8/18, 11:49 PM
I really enjoyed this. I do wish it were a tad longer. And was the guy's real name supposed to be William Smith and Brown was fake? That was a bit confusing.
Swizzington
1/8/18, 10:15 PM
Well, tuxedo/manservant stuff is probably my biggest turn on, so I was always going to love it. With that said, the journal format is potentially really powerful, but it's hard to pull off convincingly. For instance, I can't imagine why someone would write lines of dialogue in their personal diary, like the narrator does on day 20.
PowerThrill
1/8/18, 9:38 PM
Looks like I’m doing more of this in 2018.
Anonymous
1/8/18, 8:22 PM
Very good story! No sex, but very good transformation into a manservant.
1/8/18, 7:07 PM
I'm hoping some of the readers may recognize Dalton. Or the name of Dalton. It's been a while since we last saw him, but I always intended to bring him back in this fashion.
Anonymous
1/8/18, 6:44 PM
Very little erotism if any, no character descriptions, and an unacceptable length, all add up to a very disappointing entry. Consider submitting more than just an introduction or teaser.
Anonymous
1/8/18, 5:45 PM
Love it. Love tuxedos and becoming a manservant.
Anonymous
1/8/18, 4:04 PM
I loove political MC stories! Congrats and I hope you keep going, makes such a daring power fantasy!
1/8/18, 3:34 PM
I can't help but notice due to both the particularity and detail by which you you keep coming back to the event of your characters dealing with testicular cancer or possible goad removal along with hiatuses that you're probably speaking from personal experience. I guess well that's something to consider or deal with. But in terms of situation and attitude with how you approach energy of your story detail and setup well I personally think you've gotten better as a writer because of both the practice and effort that you put in So in terms of personal preference I don't think anything's going to beat the debut story with the male pleasure centers. Though I do like you're merging the idea of all-male environments and the effects that your kind of Bio cyber plague can have as they're intelligent symbionts can operate further their goals. Plus yeah it's nice too sort of Taken account some people have it rough and see what this amazing if kind of scary transformation could do for them. As well as all the other sorts of people that are likely to end up in prison and the effects of them and where they're going to end up. Will new looks or specializations come up? What about the existing tribes and groups that will then be affected? And of course while still isolated they can likely build up more facilities and infrastructure sorry I'm a big nerd at heart just I'm both sexually excited and gleefully imaginative at where things can go