Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/9/18, 4:33 AM
Awesome! Loved every chapter!
Anonymous
1/9/18, 3:56 AM
Fiendishly fun, as always!
1/9/18, 2:15 AM
Perfect! Best one yet.
Anonymous
1/9/18, 12:59 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter! :Q
Anonymous
1/9/18, 12:53 AM
No, that was rather honest. Saying that the story sucked, that would be rude. Don't stop writing --- just do a little editing, and rewriting, and editing. It's called creative writing. Create!!!
Aug 19, 2010
screamingmoist
1/9/18, 12:47 AM
Glad you enjoyed it! This whole series was super fun to write. I wouldn't be surprised if this crystal turns up again in future stories at some point.
1/9/18, 12:37 AM
I just want to say thank you for reading this series. I'm sorry if I stalled between some of the chapter. So I appreciate your patience, and I can only hope that you feel rewarded with the outcome. This does conclude the story of Fusion. I don't think there's really anything more to tell regarding the Fused men. They obviously accomplished their mission, and have harvested every man on the planet. Now that they're seeking new planets to conquer, I can only hope that they create a portal that leads them to our Earth. Now wouldn't that be nice?
Anonymous
1/8/18, 11:49 PM
I really enjoyed this. I do wish it were a tad longer. And was the guy's real name supposed to be William Smith and Brown was fake? That was a bit confusing.
Swizzington
1/8/18, 10:15 PM
Well, tuxedo/manservant stuff is probably my biggest turn on, so I was always going to love it. With that said, the journal format is potentially really powerful, but it's hard to pull off convincingly. For instance, I can't imagine why someone would write lines of dialogue in their personal diary, like the narrator does on day 20.
PowerThrill
1/8/18, 9:38 PM
Looks like I’m doing more of this in 2018.