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1/8/18, 3:34 PM
I can't help but notice due to both the particularity and detail by which you you keep coming back to the event of your characters dealing with testicular cancer or possible goad removal along with hiatuses that you're probably speaking from personal experience. I guess well that's something to consider or deal with. But in terms of situation and attitude with how you approach energy of your story detail and setup well I personally think you've gotten better as a writer because of both the practice and effort that you put in So in terms of personal preference I don't think anything's going to beat the debut story with the male pleasure centers. Though I do like you're merging the idea of all-male environments and the effects that your kind of Bio cyber plague can have as they're intelligent symbionts can operate further their goals. Plus yeah it's nice too sort of Taken account some people have it rough and see what this amazing if kind of scary transformation could do for them. As well as all the other sorts of people that are likely to end up in prison and the effects of them and where they're going to end up. Will new looks or specializations come up? What about the existing tribes and groups that will then be affected? And of course while still isolated they can likely build up more facilities and infrastructure sorry I'm a big nerd at heart just I'm both sexually excited and gleefully imaginative at where things can go
Anonymous
1/8/18, 2:10 PM
very hot man, thank you!
Anonymous
1/8/18, 7:24 AM
the sooner the better, plz. learning of ch. 9 already finished make me getting hard immediately!!
Anonymous
1/8/18, 6:42 AM
That was rather rude. Anyway I enjoyed the story. Keep on writing.
1/8/18, 4:51 AM
Terrific start! I hope you continue this soon!
1/8/18, 2:43 AM
9th chapter now please. It kind of sucks when other story parts come out much later and you forget characters and scenes and have to go back or reread.
Anonymous
1/8/18, 1:56 AM
*half
Anonymous
1/8/18, 1:55 AM
It does seem almost like two people wrote this story. About halr way through the tenses change and the grammar gets really bad. It could use editing. I would not say the story was "predictable", but could have been filled out more with more gradual "changes".
Anonymous
1/8/18, 1:30 AM
Don't worry. I read it three times. Loved it every time.