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9/24/24, 3:42 AM
I hope James finds another copy of the app and changes himself back.
Anonymous
9/24/24, 3:26 AM
Please continue this
Anonymous
9/23/24, 9:01 PM
Please keep this going!

9/24/24, 3:15 AM
@Anonymous Thanks man. What did you like about it
Lampshade15
9/23/24, 11:11 AM
Hot concept, I'd love to read more!

9/24/24, 3:15 AM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Thanks dude
Anonymous
9/24/24, 3:14 AM
Killer idea. More
Anonymous
9/24/24, 2:12 AM
This is a good start, but I'm expecting, and hoping, that Lucas turns the tables on Bobby seeing as he's majoring in computer science. It's definitely possible he can come up with some sort of subliminal program to get control of Bobby.
9/24/24, 1:36 AM
Hot - what happens next?
Anonymous
9/24/24, 1:24 AM
Super hot installment! I do hope Trav is also afflicted with JPS and you get inspired to write how his night went. Either way can’t wait to read whatever you craft next.
Zander
9/24/24, 1:22 AM
I hope new chapters will come out and the story will not end banally at the end) It would be nice if the victims would cruelly take revenge on their offenders (in the finale of the story, destroying the lives of those who controlled the minds and selling them into slavery (so that they understand) everything that is happening to them.