Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/8/18, 1:29 AM
Poorly written and predictable. Grammar/usage were awful. Did you even bother editing? As for the story, like I said, predictable. I read the whole story hoping something different, but I was disappointed.
TheWanderer
1/7/18, 11:29 PM
Or maybe it doesn’t :) maybe it didn’t change anything at all
Anonymous
1/7/18, 11:05 PM
How can a placebo effect make you gay? hmmmmm.
1/7/18, 8:42 PM
Was trying to weave them in a bit more fluidly than I usually do, evidently it didn't work out well, lol. Thanks much for the feedback.
1/7/18, 8:13 PM
So I wrote out Chapter 9 this morning. But I'm hesitant to post it. I'm simply worried that I've been posting each installment to fast lately. I want to warn everyone that the Fusion series will end at Chapter 10. So I'm curious when people think I should post the 9th chapter. Do you guys want to get this series over quickly, or perhaps wait just a little while longer?
Stormbound
1/7/18, 6:32 PM
Very nice and hot use of the placebo affect!
Anonymous
1/7/18, 1:13 PM
the flashbacks were a bit jarring and confusing. It would help if you put some sort of indication before and after a flashback, like a line break or something
Jul 14, 2009
Mr.Dick
1/7/18, 9:56 AM
This is one of the all time greats. And probably the reason I fell in love with the site. I wish Lee would continue writing.
Mr.Dick
1/7/18, 9:53 AM
This is one of my favourite stories as of late. I love that you build the main character up so much only to have him break so easily to someone much more powerful. It reminds me of a classic story called "there's always someone better". I go back to this one all time.
Anonymous
1/7/18, 7:34 AM
Of course it’s not confusing to the author! But as a writer and editor, it’s hard to follow, in my opinion.