Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/6/18, 7:56 AM
Great set-up, but then everything just seemed to rush to a conclusion after the capture
Anonymous
1/6/18, 5:47 AM
Thank you for the man pube. I'm always turned on by manly pubic hair.
Anonymous
1/6/18, 5:19 AM
^ the author did "speak" at the end of the chapter, saying advice is welcome. There's no need to be offended by it or take that tone, so calm down. Can't expect non-native speakers to know the nuances of the language
1/6/18, 3:52 AM
I was thinking the same about the series. Starting with one young guy in a lab to an older man in a lab with no balls and all that has happened between the two. Nice perspective seeing it from someone observing and interested in the transformations rather than just caught up and/or scared.
bleuboy
1/6/18, 12:03 AM
Very well written and I'm enjoying the premise. I'll be expecting more from you :)
Lowresist
1/5/18, 8:10 PM
So excited that you'll continue this story. Loved the kinky fisting stuff in it and the triple penetration. Hope you write some more hot scenes with the coach ;-)!
Cigarboycody
1/5/18, 4:21 PM
What s fuckn' hot series!! Wish my CIGAR MASTER would talk to my dad. Make him a nasty maduro smoking PigDaddy that loved to fuck his son:s tight jockpig pusdy while we both smoked big maduros
ChaoticDjinn
1/5/18, 3:40 PM
I honestly don't find the narrative flow all that hard to follow, but then again I'm the one who wrote it. If you word count it out the story is actually told more in the present moments than through "Flashbacks". I felt like trying a story that was told partly in the moment and partly through the characters recollections. Dealing with life (relatively)shortly after a world warping event rather than a play by play as it was happening.
Anonymous
1/5/18, 12:57 PM
hot man, thank you!
1/5/18, 10:57 AM
I love this series! So glad that you're continuing it (and coming up with hot variations on the transformation scene).