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bleuboy
1/6/18, 12:03 AM
Very well written and I'm enjoying the premise. I'll be expecting more from you :)
Lowresist
1/5/18, 8:10 PM
So excited that you'll continue this story. Loved the kinky fisting stuff in it and the triple penetration. Hope you write some more hot scenes with the coach ;-)!
Cigarboycody
1/5/18, 4:21 PM
What s fuckn' hot series!! Wish my CIGAR MASTER would talk to my dad. Make him a nasty maduro smoking PigDaddy that loved to fuck his son:s tight jockpig pusdy while we both smoked big maduros
ChaoticDjinn
1/5/18, 3:40 PM
I honestly don't find the narrative flow all that hard to follow, but then again I'm the one who wrote it. If you word count it out the story is actually told more in the present moments than through "Flashbacks". I felt like trying a story that was told partly in the moment and partly through the characters recollections. Dealing with life (relatively)shortly after a world warping event rather than a play by play as it was happening.
Anonymous
1/5/18, 12:57 PM
hot man, thank you!
1/5/18, 10:57 AM
I love this series! So glad that you're continuing it (and coming up with hot variations on the transformation scene).
Anonymous
1/5/18, 10:39 AM
Nice!!
Anonymous
1/5/18, 9:54 AM
would love a sequel like D O M or anyother would be nice to see
Anonymous
1/5/18, 8:41 AM
Need more families falling under control! This is so hot!
Anonymous
1/5/18, 8:35 AM
Man, you sure do a godlike work with these; keep them coming, I can’t have enough of them!