Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/5/18, 8:35 AM
Man, you sure do a godlike work with these; keep them coming, I can’t have enough of them!
Anonymous
1/5/18, 7:30 AM
Really confusing telling the whole thing in flashbacks - why not just tell the story?
1/5/18, 2:42 AM
I love the stories of entire police squads becoming slaves/drones. Nice work with a yard full of prison guards with more inside. WOOF!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 11:52 PM
Just a suggestion for the Spanish, the Spanish people, from Spain, are the ones who actually use Tío, in Mexico we say "wey" to name people, we use it a lot, but not as much as some people think, it's like when you use "dude" or so, please if you need help, speak, because I felt a little ofended when you wrote "tío" coming from a Mexican, we don't say it
1/4/18, 9:32 PM
I detected just a hint that Tim might not have as much control as he thinks - fab twist if so!
Danny
1/4/18, 9:31 PM
God I want to be Paul's hypno-son. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 9:28 PM
wish this story would go further I LOVE IT
Danny
1/4/18, 9:21 PM
OMG I so wish I could be a hypno-brother in this extended family! SO hot!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 8:46 PM
I absolutely love this story! I have read it multiple times since its posting, and it still packs the same punch after many readings. I really enjoyed the relationship between Buzz and Jerry. The hero worship aspect of Buzz pushes the story forward and allows for him to be an easy mark for Paul's hypnotism. I'm not always into stories that include incest like this one, but the two brothers getting it on is incredibly hot! And the twist that Paul has Jerry under control as well just adds to the great overall storyline. Like many others I would love to see the story continued as Jerry and Paul teach Buzz more about man-on-man sex as well as getting Buzz's friends involved. Hope you're able to add to the story soon! Thanks so much for sharing your talents. Great stuff!!!!!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 7:52 PM
What about other mythical creatures - the Tooth Fairy? The Easter Bum...er Bunny! Jack Skellington at Halloween... An Ent on Arbor Day... the list could go on....