Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/5/18, 10:39 AM
Nice!!
Anonymous
1/5/18, 9:54 AM
would love a sequel like D O M or anyother would be nice to see
Anonymous
1/5/18, 8:41 AM
Need more families falling under control! This is so hot!
Anonymous
1/5/18, 8:35 AM
Man, you sure do a godlike work with these; keep them coming, I can’t have enough of them!
Anonymous
1/5/18, 7:30 AM
Really confusing telling the whole thing in flashbacks - why not just tell the story?
1/5/18, 2:42 AM
I love the stories of entire police squads becoming slaves/drones. Nice work with a yard full of prison guards with more inside. WOOF!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 11:52 PM
Just a suggestion for the Spanish, the Spanish people, from Spain, are the ones who actually use Tío, in Mexico we say "wey" to name people, we use it a lot, but not as much as some people think, it's like when you use "dude" or so, please if you need help, speak, because I felt a little ofended when you wrote "tío" coming from a Mexican, we don't say it
1/4/18, 9:32 PM
I detected just a hint that Tim might not have as much control as he thinks - fab twist if so!
Danny
1/4/18, 9:31 PM
God I want to be Paul's hypno-son. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 9:28 PM
wish this story would go further I LOVE IT