Recent Comments

1/4/18, 9:32 PM
I detected just a hint that Tim might not have as much control as he thinks - fab twist if so!
Danny
1/4/18, 9:31 PM
God I want to be Paul's hypno-son. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 9:28 PM
wish this story would go further I LOVE IT
Danny
1/4/18, 9:21 PM
OMG I so wish I could be a hypno-brother in this extended family! SO hot!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 8:46 PM
I absolutely love this story! I have read it multiple times since its posting, and it still packs the same punch after many readings. I really enjoyed the relationship between Buzz and Jerry. The hero worship aspect of Buzz pushes the story forward and allows for him to be an easy mark for Paul's hypnotism. I'm not always into stories that include incest like this one, but the two brothers getting it on is incredibly hot! And the twist that Paul has Jerry under control as well just adds to the great overall storyline. Like many others I would love to see the story continued as Jerry and Paul teach Buzz more about man-on-man sex as well as getting Buzz's friends involved. Hope you're able to add to the story soon! Thanks so much for sharing your talents. Great stuff!!!!!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 7:52 PM
What about other mythical creatures - the Tooth Fairy? The Easter Bum...er Bunny! Jack Skellington at Halloween... An Ent on Arbor Day... the list could go on....
Anonymous
1/4/18, 7:38 PM
I like the physical changes - well described! Freckles are an interesting additional - beyond the usual huge pecs and butt.
Anonymous
1/4/18, 7:36 PM
well done, unexpected reversal where the "victim" is actually the instigator.
Anonymous
1/4/18, 7:11 PM
Well written revenge story - chilling and thrilling at the same time! No one will steal from Mr. Roberts without paying dearly! Love the disproportionate muscle growth. Very sexy!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 6:54 PM
Well written, good atmosphere of dread on the part of the protagonist. I'm not a fan of muscle theft and cock shrinkage. I much prefer the reverse, but this was well written.