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ChaoticDjinn
1/5/18, 3:40 PM
I honestly don't find the narrative flow all that hard to follow, but then again I'm the one who wrote it. If you word count it out the story is actually told more in the present moments than through "Flashbacks". I felt like trying a story that was told partly in the moment and partly through the characters recollections. Dealing with life (relatively)shortly after a world warping event rather than a play by play as it was happening.
Anonymous
1/5/18, 12:57 PM
hot man, thank you!
1/5/18, 10:57 AM
I love this series! So glad that you're continuing it (and coming up with hot variations on the transformation scene).
Anonymous
1/5/18, 10:39 AM
Nice!!
Anonymous
1/5/18, 9:54 AM
would love a sequel like D O M or anyother would be nice to see
Anonymous
1/5/18, 8:41 AM
Need more families falling under control! This is so hot!
Anonymous
1/5/18, 8:35 AM
Man, you sure do a godlike work with these; keep them coming, I can’t have enough of them!
Anonymous
1/5/18, 7:30 AM
Really confusing telling the whole thing in flashbacks - why not just tell the story?
1/5/18, 2:42 AM
I love the stories of entire police squads becoming slaves/drones. Nice work with a yard full of prison guards with more inside. WOOF!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 11:52 PM
Just a suggestion for the Spanish, the Spanish people, from Spain, are the ones who actually use Tío, in Mexico we say "wey" to name people, we use it a lot, but not as much as some people think, it's like when you use "dude" or so, please if you need help, speak, because I felt a little ofended when you wrote "tío" coming from a Mexican, we don't say it