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1/4/18, 5:14 AM
i hope we can find out more about The Change at some point. Great Story!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 3:46 AM
Again a beautiful chapter! A little sad that Jon won't recognize his dad,but sexy regardless I'm guessing Chuck's chapter is next? Looking forward to it Btw, One And The Same is an amazing story <3
user79477
1/4/18, 2:02 AM
I want to see a chapter 3 to this, where the dad and marco get together.
Dante
1/4/18, 1:50 AM
loving your build up, always wanted a follow up to Satyr in the woods, which is for me one of the hottest stories on this site! well done!
Anonymous
1/4/18, 1:15 AM
Love Himringyo and so I'm sure I'll be interested in this story but can you please make smaller paragraphs?? I honestly can't read it. Just remember, new character speaking -> new paragraph.
Boone
1/4/18, 12:43 AM
Hot as always. Is good to see you never lose the touch, Edlam! Although I've enjoyed with the lowering of Chuck, I miss your over-the-top humiliation style. I love when your characters suffer a cruel ridiculing. Would have loved to see Chuck's point of view.
Anonymous
1/3/18, 11:34 PM
Excellent
tomozco
1/3/18, 11:06 PM
Hot as usual, Edlam! Didn't expect you'd go back and look at Jon's conversion, but that is exactly the sort of plot that gets me going! Looking forward to the next parts!
Anonymous
1/3/18, 10:13 PM
lets go part 5
Anonymous
1/3/18, 8:45 PM
This series is very well-written in terms of characters, hypnotic method and how it plays out. I'm usually not a fan of "young guy gets MC powers/object and takes over hotter guys" but the fact the first five chapters in the series don't show their hand gives it a very different, and welcome flavor. Putting all the focus on the subjects and the orders actually being followed, with the real master almost in the background and pretending to be a victim, gives a lot of insight into how the mind control affects them. Which obviously makes for a hotter story. And here, with the reveal from the last chapter set, we finally get to see exactly how Tim does it. Also, I'm a sucker for glowing solid-green hypno eyes, so there's that. Whether this is building to a greater plot or simply continues as Tim indulging himself and brainwashing them, I'm really looking forward to more!