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Anonymous
1/3/18, 7:03 PM
Ufff, I cum buckets Good job
BiAsh
1/3/18, 6:31 PM
I loved it. I say more stories reminiscent of Barlai's great stroke stories. His works are always a favorite of mine, and imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.
nycboot
1/3/18, 5:53 PM
I remember commenting (on "Satyr in the Wood") how the story had an element of conservation. Here too, your writing makes the reader want to commune with nature (as it does with Jeremy). It's not "simple," but just "unadorned" but direct writing, which is reflected in the content (about leaving one's troubles behind and "being in the moment.") I love this touch - it really puts the reader in the subject's perspective. (I assume there's going to be some twist in the story, otherwise it would be a repeat.) I guess I find the idea of a satyr very hot (I figure they have no inhibitions about their sexuality or anything else). Looking forward to more installments!
Anonymous
1/3/18, 5:19 PM
I really am greateful you are back and continuing writing storys. I find yours espacially hot.
Anonymous
1/3/18, 4:04 PM
names suddenly change and lot of mistakes there
1/3/18, 3:49 PM
Perfection as always
screamingmoist
1/3/18, 2:34 PM
Thanks for the feedback. I like to try and include a “what happens next” after the change. I’m working on a more clothing focused story as we speak, so hopefully that’ll be wrapped up soon.
Anonymous
1/3/18, 2:26 PM
lets see how things go now,
ChaoticDjinn
1/3/18, 1:26 PM
Oops, this isn't part a series.
Darmani
1/3/18, 1:00 PM
@hypnothrill I cannot seem to find Jockey Desires with the search engine, in your author's list OR on mcstories.com so I could use a link