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Anonymous
1/3/18, 8:45 PM
This series is very well-written in terms of characters, hypnotic method and how it plays out. I'm usually not a fan of "young guy gets MC powers/object and takes over hotter guys" but the fact the first five chapters in the series don't show their hand gives it a very different, and welcome flavor. Putting all the focus on the subjects and the orders actually being followed, with the real master almost in the background and pretending to be a victim, gives a lot of insight into how the mind control affects them. Which obviously makes for a hotter story. And here, with the reveal from the last chapter set, we finally get to see exactly how Tim does it. Also, I'm a sucker for glowing solid-green hypno eyes, so there's that. Whether this is building to a greater plot or simply continues as Tim indulging himself and brainwashing them, I'm really looking forward to more!
Jan 20, 2007
Anonymous
1/3/18, 8:21 PM
Love a big butt
Anonymous
1/3/18, 8:19 PM
Love it so much
Aug 19, 2010
Anonymous
1/3/18, 8:18 PM
Love everything about this one! The big pecs, the huge nips, the bubble butt, and all of that combined with the humiliation is so friction' hot! I love it when a guy is aware but helpless to do anything about it
Anonymous
1/3/18, 8:00 PM
Shorter paragraphs would help
Anonymous
1/3/18, 7:58 PM
Thought the Chiro was setting him up for his own use. Nice surprise twist there
Anonymous
1/3/18, 7:56 PM
genius, thank you!
1/3/18, 7:37 PM
Aw thanks nycboot! Appreciate the feedback and kind words. Yes it has very similar elements but I plan on throwing some new twists in. Stay tuned :-)
Anonymous
1/3/18, 7:03 PM
Ufff, I cum buckets Good job
BiAsh
1/3/18, 6:31 PM
I loved it. I say more stories reminiscent of Barlai's great stroke stories. His works are always a favorite of mine, and imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.