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9/23/24, 2:53 PM
Thank you for another great series and this fantastic epilogue. Love the domination of Superman, the muscle theft, and bringing Bruce back in for some punishment. I will imagine the treatment that other heroes will get after the Dr learns everything from Super and Bats. No hero's ass is safe.

9/23/24, 6:45 PM
@[Larry](/user/show/494946) Aw thanks
9/23/24, 6:38 PM
A very good conclusion! I really appreciate the warm ending, too - especially the trigger at the end. Funny!
9/23/24, 5:52 PM
Glad to see you guys aren't disappointed in the direction I'm taking this! Obviously a hard left turn from where we started, but I've got a nice little ride planned out for you and I'm hoping to deliver it all before Halloween!
9/23/24, 5:51 PM
I'm subscribed to you on substar and just gotta say that this chapter is too good. I love the whole story and I'm really really impressed! Great job on the series!!
9/23/24, 5:09 PM
It's a very interesting introduction to meta-genre. Is there a grand conspiracy, a mastermind behind the scenes, a double agent? I'm looking forward to seeing how it plays out.
Anonymous
9/23/24, 5:04 PM
I loved this story! Please continue with more chapters!
Sep 17, 2024
9/23/24, 4:59 PM
More please……I love this story since I’m a bi chubby chaser…..
9/23/24, 4:25 PM
John’s next orders could be that Eric goes to the gym’s office, where John has left the items that Eric wore at the dinner with the neighbors, with an added leather hood. After Eric is dressed, to be ordered to participate in the leather pride parade that John had entered Eric in. Also that Eric is not permitted to cum, no matter what until he gets back home
9/23/24, 4:15 PM
suggestion: alternate endings are all the rage these day.. perhaps one path where hypnotist wins and one where he doesn't?
9/23/24, 3:32 PM
Does this chapter chronologically occur after the remaining chapters? It seems out of sequence.