Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/1/18, 10:12 PM
What a wonderful way to start 2018 .... more from Rubbrsome!
JoSmith
1/1/18, 8:37 PM
Thanks everyone. This was my first attempt at writing an MC story and thanks for letting me know about the prologue. I edited it on my word document after I posted it on here and forgot to edit it. Glad y'all enjoyed it.
Anonymous
1/1/18, 8:35 PM
Seems like this is a totally involuntary change. Lee's will is being destroyed and replaced by what the Marine wants. The Marine is making up a new person out of whole cloth - there will be nothing left of the original Lee. Lee did not make any choices - he was kidnapped, brain washed and drugged. Not much fun for him.....
Anonymous
1/1/18, 7:34 PM
Happy new year, Edlam! I wish you a great 2018.
Boon
1/1/18, 7:16 PM
Happy new year! Good story! The dialogue is pretty good and hot. Some paragraphs are a little bit too long, but I really don't see a problem with that, is just a thing of format and doesn't affect the reading to me. The best for me are the parodic sluty clothing styles and how you've describe them, I love it. I see that as a form of humiliation and self debasing of the characters, especially if it's ridiculously sexualized (my favourite was the toolbelt with sex toys) and I'm glad you took your time to describe them. Would be fun if you writte another instalment set in ranch, with a bunch of men being turned in different variants of sluts but all in the cowboy theme (a dominant, a twink, a sissy, a slave...).
Anonymous
1/1/18, 6:52 PM
Can’t wait for the next party in the overall story 😍
Anonymous
1/1/18, 5:48 PM
please do another chapter
Anonymous
1/1/18, 4:33 PM
Fantastic, don't stop!!
Anonymous
1/1/18, 12:59 PM
Kinda sad that there wasn't more mc in this series to be honest, but I loved every step of it regardless! The only thing I will say is a prologue is the beginning of a story, and the end is an epilogue, but otherwise this was incredibly well written and thanks for the ride! Hope to see more from you!
Anonymous
1/1/18, 12:53 PM
Good story. You mean epilogue, not prologue though. And for a more subjective criticism, I hope to never ever read the word "dadcunt" ever again. Good apart from that though :)