Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/19/17, 10:43 PM
What about ones we haven’t seen yet? Cuz pool has 15 balls
Anonymous
12/19/17, 8:26 PM
Beautiful
Anonymous
12/19/17, 8:04 PM
WOOOOW!!! Exactly the twist I wanted to see, perfect!!!! Please continue! And btw, the thing of sending Brendan's brother to get more guys is fantastic, loved the idea .
Anonymous
12/19/17, 8:04 PM
WOOOOW!!! Exactly the twist I wanted to see, perfect!!!! Please continue! And btw, the thing of sending Brendan's brother to get more guys is fantastic, loved the idea .
Anonymous
12/19/17, 6:17 PM
Orange - Will Brown - Obedience Green - Morality Red - Lust Yellow - Flesh Blue - Talent Purple - Love
12/19/17, 3:13 PM
I'm loving this, what a fantastic story! Please keep writing :D can't wait to see what happens with Steve also!
Anonymous
12/19/17, 2:59 PM
Like the personality/voice changes to Kyle.
12/19/17, 2:21 PM
An oblivious character is so hot!
12/19/17, 2:21 PM
Please don't end it there!
Anonymous
12/19/17, 1:18 PM
I especially likee the way you turned made the "team" and "uniform" descriptions so erotic. I wish it was longer describing how he wants to "be like them" or "become them," Maybe describe the uniform in more detail.. The phrases like "part of the team" are so good and wish there were more :D