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Anonymous
12/9/17, 4:25 AM
PLEASE do more....I've gotten off to this like 4 times today already. This was insanely fucking hot.
Anonymous
12/9/17, 4:06 AM
@Swizzington it says he was dressed as one, not necessarily that he was one. If he was one, he would have had his Missionary companion with him. Good writing requires research.
sweatnosis
12/9/17, 2:07 AM
I think there's a special header for teaser chapters that lead to pay sites. That said, I pledged a buck just based on this - if it ends up being more about mental transformation, turning into an obsessed bodybuilder/lifter/gym bro/whatever, than it is about magical muscle growth, then this is exactly my sweet spot. Nothing but the one morph gif on the Patreon though. Probably should've waited on this until you had more up over there, people could feel gypped.
bleuboy
12/8/17, 11:02 PM
Wow, thanks for the response guys! I apologize if there's any glaring grammar problems any of you notice. And thanks for that insight Boon! I may or may not do a reprise, but it just depends since I suffer from writers block a lot :)
Anonymous
12/8/17, 10:33 PM
This is INCREDIBLE
Anonymous
12/8/17, 10:08 PM
So hot. Would love to see more Bulge boys.
12/8/17, 8:55 PM
Good story. Please do continue this. I usually can't stand military stories because it's obvious that the writer almost never knows anything about the real military. This story was at least believable in that context. One nit to pick - it would be an Article 15, not an Article 47. UCMJ Article 47 is failure to appear or testify, while 15 is non-judicial punishment.
Anonymous
12/8/17, 7:25 PM
I like the differences between the two, personally. Looking forward to the next installment!
12/8/17, 7:25 PM
Such a HOT story....... keep on writing more of that
LongtimeFan
12/8/17, 6:03 PM
INCREDIBLE! It reminds me of some of Hypnothrill’s (my favorite author here) work—the brainwashing, the muscle growth, the gradual dumbing down...Hot, Hot, Hot. Thanks for a great story! :)