Recent Comments

Bazir
12/7/17, 9:15 PM
Really amazing story and good endinghope see how it continue soon :)
Anonymous
12/7/17, 8:21 PM
2 quick notes for editing: it switches to I somewhere when referring to Buddy which is confusing.... and I think there’s one where you mix up Joey and Karl
Anonymous
12/7/17, 8:16 PM
Will this continue?
Anonymous
12/7/17, 7:52 PM
What a fun sexy story. Quirky and hot ideas. Looking forward to the next Storyteller tale.
Swizzington
12/7/17, 7:44 PM
The story explicitly states that the character is a Mormon missionary. It's in the sixth paragraph.
biguynj
12/7/17, 5:14 PM
I like where this is going Kevin has no idea lol
Anonymous
12/7/17, 4:41 PM
lol home alone
Happy Endings
12/7/17, 4:12 PM
I am ashamed! Fixed!
Anonymous
12/7/17, 3:36 PM
Love the start to this story! My only critique is to pay attention to the names, you had said Kyle a couple times instead of one of the characters names, which left me wondering who Kyle was.
Anonymous
12/7/17, 3:33 PM
This is going to be a fun read!! I can see Kevin going through all kinds of changes.