Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/3/17, 9:06 PM
Hope there will be another update! Love this story!
Anonymous
12/3/17, 1:51 PM
I love any stories with cigars and this one is no exception. Great job.
Anonymous
12/3/17, 12:48 PM
*turn the player
Anonymous
12/3/17, 12:47 PM
I have some card sugestions: Black plague: turns the person Black, Thug Life: thur the player into a musclar thug, Mobster: turn the player into a mobster depnding on the race: Itailan mobster if white, Yakuza (Japanese mafia) if azian, a manber of Colombian drug cartel if latino or a member of the Bakassi Boys (a nigerian organized crime organization) if black. so what do you think?
Awesome
12/3/17, 8:26 AM
Really good story. Did not see that twist at the end. Great work!
Anonymous
12/3/17, 4:59 AM
Cool story! Loved the pics!
Dec 2, 2017
HyperMuscleMonster
12/3/17, 3:00 AM
Love this, definitely need more. Though I'd like to see a tale where it takes a little longer, maybe over a day or two, to actually change someone. I love seeing a musclebeast become so in ordinary circumstances, his changes twisting his mundane life-details into mindless horny rutting.
nycboot
12/3/17, 2:31 AM
I think this must be the funniest story on Gay Spiral Stories. It took me a bit to get it, but get it I did, and I so enjoyed how you've played with the meta-story. (Love the dialogue between Dawson and the Storyteller.) Perhaps your next story will have your characters challenge you to write not what you want, but what they want? :)
Dec 2, 2017
BostonSatyr
12/2/17, 10:48 PM
Awesome - would love to see this expanded. A lot of potential for more hot scenes. Take us to the police station... how will the army resold to this national security threat, & what will happen when THEY get infected? More chapters, please!