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Steve
9/22/24, 7:05 AM
Great story bro
9/22/24, 6:14 AM
I like the story a lot at first, but then I thought it went too far. We know there are jocks like that in real life. And Doctors too. It wrong to beat someone up. Then get them back and let it go. But to ruin someone life, and the don’t know why. And to the point the Doc took it. Turn me off. The last 3 parts. I did like the roommate part though. All I all it was a good read, just too much humiliation for me.
9/20/24, 1:25 PM
You should continue this story about the dark corruption of a holy man. It's a very hot idea.

9/22/24, 4:00 AM
@[Demonicus Satani (Solo)](/user/show/588192) Thank you for your advice. I would love to continue writing - but life is just too complicated. I have been travelling way too much! I love what you write. Darkness and depravity are my thing as well. You inspire me to get back to my writing. Being raped by a pretty Chinese twink is my favourite pastime - especially after a long time eating his ass hole and cock.
Aug 1, 2019
9/22/24, 3:09 AM
At first i was thrown by the name Chernobyl becauae i had the image of MANKINDS WORST NUCLEAR CATASTROPHY, death, destruction and coverup! But then i thought maybe Russian immigrants from Ukraine wanted to reinvigorate the name. After all Anericans name their kids after the most outlandish given names. Moonpie, Zephyr, Comet to nane a few. So i was reading along then saw this post. I know I'm a history teacher so I've gotta known this stuff. I guess if you are younger than I, you probably never got to the 1980s in American History. Or you have no affinity for history, which is understandable; most of my friends are that way. Regardless, and please excuse my lengthy post, you wrote a great story of which my loins will remember!
9/21/24, 10:10 PM
This is a very wholesome ending in a way and I like it very much! I really like the idea that while the rest were in the middle of Roman erotica, Ron was just acting like a chicken not being related at all.

9/22/24, 2:57 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Yeah, I just thought it would be a very funny touch if one of them was just not to the hypnotist's taste! What do you do with that leftover guy?
9/21/24, 1:27 PM
I must say I really enjoyed this ending. The strange thing is that although I have a vague impression of the previous chapters, this chapter has no impression at all. Maybe I didn’t continue reading when I saw Scott failed, so I’m glad I could revisit the story on GSS and finish it. What Scott thinks is really happening is actually just being calculated in the system grid, but his body still becomes an ARNI. This really brings a sense of déjà vu to The Matrix. I believe that Scott is still destroying the ARNI Program in his world, and even has the opportunity to become a Neo-like character. However, because the system separates qualified personalities from unqualified personalities, even if He is separated from the system grid and has no body to use. The Zone is smarter than The Matrix. Another movie that reminds me of is "Upgraded" (2018). There are also scenarios where a person's consciousness is locked in a simulated situation but the body is used separately. Returning to the story itself, all units will recognize themselves as ARNI personalities even if they are given different appearances by the system, with only different body numbers. In theory, of course Mike can feel this permanent pleasure, but Scott can't, but in fact Scott's body can also feel it. This is actually a prize for everyone, right? But the number of unqualified men accounts for 92%. Will this not cause problems when ARNI sneaks into human society? For example, if it uses Scott's appearance today to approach its former friends and wants to recruit him, but his personality is not that of Scott, wouldn't it be seen through? Even applying only the memories of failures to ARNI does not seem to work, because memory is an essential element in shaping personality, which may cause ARNI to lose control. Having said that, it is easy for ARNI to knock down the targets, so it seems that there is no need to lurk or disguise😓 This is a kink story, and I should simply enjoy the pleasure, but I seem to be a little serious about the details. I hope I didn't offend you, I really enjoy the story. In fact, even as I write these, I still continue leaking, it feels like I am also in The Zone.

9/21/24, 4:51 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) That's exactly right. The sad truth is not all men are fully committed to being a drone. I think (strange as it sounds) the Zone considers the ethically implications of reducing a person's mind and enslaving their body. So to get around this moral dilemma, it rationalizes that Scott's mind is preserved, and he's actually now living the life he "really" wants. His body is technically the drone, while his mind/identity is living in a simulation. I don't think Scott will exist in a hostile let's destroy the System simulation forever. The System just wants a continued analysis of those that resist being turned. Once Scott believes he has won, he probably be placed in other scenarios that ultimately educate the System on further ways in understanding man. The System is always learning and improving. I never really talked about Scott's job. I should've mentioned that he was a lowly employee. He was basically a "drone" at work and had no control over his life. What Scott wants deep down is to take control. So at the beginning, he really wasn't suited for the Program. He was compelled into the program because of his interactions with drones. Meanwhile, Mike (who was Scott's boss) is in control at work. And he secretly yearns to relinquish that control and become a drone. So when you look at the two, you see how each yearns for the other's life. I just think in life we always want what the others have. In the end, both Scott and Mike got what they wanted. It may not seem like it, but this is actually a happy ending.

9/21/24, 7:01 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I didn't realize it's a happy ending, I totally missed the implecation of Scott and Mike. I will pray for all of them, including the system, hope they all will get they want. 😈😈😈

9/22/24, 2:47 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Yes, it’s definitely a good ending! Scott subconsciously feels that the system can make him better and stronger, and at the same time enjoy the physical pleasure that the system brings to him. In the end, he had both, but not in the way he thought. Instead, his consciousness felt that he was powerful enough to destroy everything in the simulation, and his body enjoyed pleasure in reality. On the contrary, when Mike saw his subordinates who often skipped work but became stronger, he did not despise his dereliction of duty but admired his changes. He is the kind of person who can truly enjoy the whole process. I hope to read more of your stories, whether they are new or old, they are sure to be exciting.
9/22/24, 1:44 AM
Love this! Can't wait what happens next :)
9/22/24, 1:11 AM
So Mikey never got a chance to you the drive on Kevin.
9/22/24, 1:01 AM
Man, wish I could go to a carnival like this... not sure which end of things I'd wind up on, though. Ascending to a higher plane via sex sounds pretty rad, though.
Anonymous
9/22/24, 1:01 AM
Just Amazing ! I hope the serie to keep going!!