Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/28/17, 4:11 PM
Excellent --
Anonymous
11/28/17, 3:58 PM
Is it me or the formulaic nature of the story made it quasi-boring? That's the problem with stories like this. After the first story, you know what's coming (npi). I'm not saying it's not entertaining, but I almost knew what was going to happen before I read it.
Gabe
11/28/17, 1:46 PM
I need a sequel. Keep writing.
11/28/17, 12:45 PM
I'm just loving the spate of creating stories right now - amazing story as ever from Baralai, can't wait for the next one!
Anonymous
11/28/17, 12:08 PM
No, i like the professor and his slaves... great!
Anonymous
11/28/17, 11:54 AM
Cant wait to see more! Please!
Max
11/28/17, 11:22 AM
Hey Titan - you are one of my favorite authors, and I have a comment about the "A Whole New Look - Part 1" story you posted on another site (unfortunately the site isn't letting me comment). It is a really hot teaser and premise, but just as a suggestion, maybe instead of leaving Eric with a beard or stache, why not have him end up completely clean shaved yet still older and more mature looking? Sometimes being clean shaved can make a man look very "no-nonsense", businesslike, and mature, especially if paired with MPB. And having him lose his beard that he was attached to would be an even more exciting change. Just a thought! :)
Kyle
11/28/17, 10:16 AM
So imaginative and well paced. Loved this. Thank you.
Anonymous
11/28/17, 10:16 AM
Excellent
Kyle
11/28/17, 8:39 AM
Fantastic story! Brilliant twist too. Bravo.