Recent Comments

11/28/17, 12:45 PM
I'm just loving the spate of creating stories right now - amazing story as ever from Baralai, can't wait for the next one!
Anonymous
11/28/17, 12:08 PM
No, i like the professor and his slaves... great!
Anonymous
11/28/17, 11:54 AM
Cant wait to see more! Please!
Max
11/28/17, 11:22 AM
Hey Titan - you are one of my favorite authors, and I have a comment about the "A Whole New Look - Part 1" story you posted on another site (unfortunately the site isn't letting me comment). It is a really hot teaser and premise, but just as a suggestion, maybe instead of leaving Eric with a beard or stache, why not have him end up completely clean shaved yet still older and more mature looking? Sometimes being clean shaved can make a man look very "no-nonsense", businesslike, and mature, especially if paired with MPB. And having him lose his beard that he was attached to would be an even more exciting change. Just a thought! :)
Kyle
11/28/17, 10:16 AM
So imaginative and well paced. Loved this. Thank you.
Anonymous
11/28/17, 10:16 AM
Excellent
Kyle
11/28/17, 8:39 AM
Fantastic story! Brilliant twist too. Bravo.
Anonymous
11/28/17, 8:06 AM
Easily my favorite series on this site by far, and I'm very glad you not only continued it, but did it in a creative and unexpected way. I loved the game show format, and having a character like Devon is exactly what it needed to be amazing! Seriously hot, and great attention to maintaining details of prior cards. I guess if I were to critique, the baseline characters were very understated other than Devon's quirk so they kind of blended together until I was identifying them by their changes instead of their initial character. But I guess that's what you give up to jump to the good stuff more quickly, and I'm not complaining!
Anonymous
11/28/17, 3:26 AM
U r easily the best author on this site baralai, and this is by far the best hirmyringo story yet.
Anonymous
11/28/17, 3:18 AM
OMG! This is so great! Christmas comes early! Thanks so much!