Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/28/17, 8:16 PM
Have you consider a version where there is more top in it and make it more a reality tv? One of those romance matching?
Anonymous
11/28/17, 6:39 PM
What a phenomenal story...beautifully written..excellent descriptions..just terrific
Anonymous
11/28/17, 6:24 PM
Please continue this great story
Anonymous
11/28/17, 4:11 PM
Hot!!!
Anonymous
11/28/17, 4:11 PM
Excellent --
Anonymous
11/28/17, 3:58 PM
Is it me or the formulaic nature of the story made it quasi-boring? That's the problem with stories like this. After the first story, you know what's coming (npi). I'm not saying it's not entertaining, but I almost knew what was going to happen before I read it.
Gabe
11/28/17, 1:46 PM
I need a sequel. Keep writing.
11/28/17, 12:45 PM
I'm just loving the spate of creating stories right now - amazing story as ever from Baralai, can't wait for the next one!
Anonymous
11/28/17, 12:08 PM
No, i like the professor and his slaves... great!
Anonymous
11/28/17, 11:54 AM
Cant wait to see more! Please!