Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/19/17, 10:40 AM
Wonderful. Squish!
M. Greene
11/19/17, 5:56 AM
I wish I was a professional writer nycboot; I could do with the money. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Anonymous
11/19/17, 4:59 AM
Wish my birthday just over a month ago had been like that !
xORRiNx
11/19/17, 4:20 AM
I'm brainstorming some crazy stories right now maybe i'll have some time to start something.
11/19/17, 3:02 AM
I totally LOVE the anxiety Trey goes through! It is so hot as he battles himself. Thanks for extending it so nice and long!!!
11/19/17, 2:44 AM
Just like Victor Hugo - introduce a gripping event at the end of the chapter. :) Your descriptions are really wonderful - the one in chapter 1 about the estate and its moat - so simple and executed with such simplicity. And you know how to control it so that the pace of the story never gets bogged down with excessive description. You must really be a professional writer - your style is too good. :)
Anonymous
11/19/17, 1:54 AM
Yes yes yes
Anonymous
11/19/17, 12:16 AM
Wait, where is the chapter 3?
Tox
11/18/17, 9:36 PM
As I always feel after reading one of your stories, WELL DONE! I was actually able to visualize the scenes happening extremely well. Love your stories Orrin, was sad to see a drought for a while, but glad to see you're still writing :)
Anonymous
11/18/17, 9:17 PM
Fantastic! Just keeps getting better and better!