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xORRiNx
11/17/17, 2:38 AM
My next story won't be same format I was just mixing it up with this one.
Anonymous
11/17/17, 2:28 AM
Another great story, but I'm not a fan of 2nd person perspective myself. It just feels awkward when 1st or 3rd flow so much better.
11/17/17, 1:10 AM
I can understand that...there are certain things that instantly turn me off too. For me, incest (with two adults) is the height of eroticism with hypnosis...getting them to break that social and moral boundary by controlling them...getting them to do something they'd NEVER do without mind control and getting them to WANT to do it...to even think it is normal, is very erotic to me. It wouldn't be in real life. In the realm of fantasy, and especially between two men, I don't think it's a deal breaker for me. But, if it's not for you, I get it. Hopefully the next few chapters are erotic enough that you can look past it! <3
11/17/17, 12:24 AM
Glad you like it. I could have split the next section in half and kept the chapters at this length... imagine the suspense!
11/16/17, 11:30 PM
Excellent twist!
Anonymous
11/16/17, 10:50 PM
I need more!!!
11/16/17, 10:44 PM
Totally back and changing the last name...I'm rather politically active and have NO clue why the name didn't make me think of that man...changing now!
jacobstone1980@gmail.com
11/16/17, 10:37 PM
can you email me i like to talk to you
Anonymous
11/16/17, 10:03 PM
Incest is tough to get over--even when it is hypnotic. Borders on pedophilia which is the lowest level of hell. But if you can keep it adult, then maybe I can swallow it.
Anonymous
11/16/17, 10:00 PM
Yeah visualizing the Grassley character dialed down the heat quite a bit.