Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/13/17, 1:19 PM
More please
Anonymous
11/13/17, 12:07 PM
Happy belated Halloween !!
Anonymous
11/13/17, 11:25 AM
Great to see Coach's love to the players!!
Anonymous
11/13/17, 10:32 AM
Please let the dad be hypnotized before everyone else!!
Anonymous
11/13/17, 10:20 AM
Great, can't wait to read the rest.
Nov 12, 2017
Anonymous
11/13/17, 5:09 AM
How he ended up in this mist intrigues me!! Great story! Loved it!!
Anonymous
11/12/17, 6:19 PM
It’s so obvious Grant is a beta who obvious loves and worships his Dad even without any hypnosis. I can’t wait to see how that turns out! — and he has older brothers too?! Wow.
Nov 12, 2017
gaycub
11/12/17, 2:43 PM
awesome story .
Nov 12, 2017
11/12/17, 1:54 PM
great story
Anonymous
11/12/17, 10:48 AM
That's why I love your stories so much Edlam! Making these hunks and dad's and authorities do things like it's normal. I find that so hot as well. Please make it rain with chapters! Can't wait for chapter 2 and all other chapters