Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/15/17, 1:09 AM
I am very impressed by the level of detail and background information in this series. The hints of the supernatural add a nice touch. It's great the way this story is leisurely spinning out- please keep it up.
Anonymous
11/15/17, 12:17 AM
John is having fun with his power and so am I!
11/14/17, 11:42 PM
Thanks guys. It was a fun fantasy for me too. It has a lot of support so I will continue it. I'll only post the next installment when I complete a full arc and not when I finish a chapter. The Voice and Cliff are the same person, sorry for the lack of clarity. Jason knows the voice personally while Mitch just knows him as the menacing man on the phone and has yet to be properly introduced.
Anonymous
11/14/17, 10:43 PM
sooooo hot, can't wait to see new chapters
Anonymous
11/14/17, 8:41 PM
This is so hot! I love seeing other men converted into mindless gym bunnies.
Nov 14, 2017
UchihaDEMS
11/14/17, 8:24 PM
Not bad, could use some improvement in the plot or character development. Also some grammar, but despite that, I like it. I hope he can hook someone else!
UchihaDEMS
11/14/17, 8:08 PM
hypnosis trough sleep, dads being zonked by his son or someone very younger, clueless subjects recruiting more victims... only the add of feet can make it even greater
Anonymous
11/14/17, 3:29 PM
Interesting. Absolute power corrupts absolutely.
Anonymous
11/14/17, 3:03 PM
Great before work jerk off!!! Love it!!!
Anonymous
11/14/17, 2:54 PM
This is an amazing story! I hope you come back and write more!