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Anonymous
11/12/17, 4:10 AM
Day incest though 👌 very nice
Anonymous
11/12/17, 3:32 AM
^ own it girl ! Lol
11/12/17, 1:34 AM
Cuz I'm turned on by it......and I write it....... ;)
Anonymous
11/12/17, 1:33 AM
With so many hot men for Paul to enslave, why does it always have to veer into incest? Why do thay always have to make family members interact? I hope this is not focussed on too much. The story was otherwise very hot.
Anonymous
11/11/17, 9:41 PM
This. This needs to continue. Please
Anonymous
11/11/17, 4:27 PM
brilliant, just brilliant! you and Robin's stories made me cum every time i read.
11/11/17, 3:37 PM
Great to have you back. Live for your stories and always worth the wait
Anonymous
11/11/17, 1:47 PM
damn Edlam, you're an incredible writer, like the others said it's the cluelessness here and the fits of verbal enthusiasm that keep it so exciting - though I would love to see more sex scenes thrown in, and more shifts of role or logic even if they're just temporary, like making Grant and the others think they're closeted gay men, or that being straight means having sex with men, not women, or making Grant think he's dating Tim or Paul or Jon's dad not... "uh.... what's her name?"
11/11/17, 1:18 PM
Like all your stories this one's a keeper also. I'd love to hear more about the father and son duo XD. Excited for the next chapter; both for this one and re-educator haha
Anonymous
11/11/17, 1:16 PM
Really love the cluelessness of this story. You are really an expert in this.