Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/7/17, 11:51 PM
Thank you for the great story!
Growing Geek
11/7/17, 11:41 PM
I keep coming back to this, love it! Baralai, you've done a great job, well done
Anonymous
11/7/17, 6:13 PM
This must to be continued!
Anonymous
11/7/17, 5:28 PM
who is nick and where has he gone???
Anonymous
11/7/17, 2:42 PM
I hate that this has never been finished. I know Jonathan Longhorn is still out there, so please if you ever see this, please continue! Love to know how it all turns out.
Darmani
11/7/17, 1:50 PM
So this series is more thematic than like "anthology" its about daddies getting boys or boys making guys their daddies?
Anonymous
11/7/17, 7:42 AM
Please keep going with this. So hot. Make buzz grow up more. Love the body hair talk
Anonymous
11/7/17, 5:22 AM
Great story! Love the gradual transformations. And Dad and Son double-teaming was hot!
anonymous
11/7/17, 3:49 AM
I've gotta ask: Did you pick the name "Theodore Giesler" because it's almost identical to "Theodore Geisel" (aka Dr Seuss)?
LongtimeFan
11/7/17, 2:02 AM
What a great second chapter! I like how you make the victims into jerks—shows that “Master”’still has a conscience despite having amazing powers. But what will the increased pleasure do? Cliffhangers are fun! Keep up the fantastic work! :)