Recent Comments

anonymous
11/7/17, 3:49 AM
I've gotta ask: Did you pick the name "Theodore Giesler" because it's almost identical to "Theodore Geisel" (aka Dr Seuss)?
LongtimeFan
11/7/17, 2:02 AM
What a great second chapter! I like how you make the victims into jerks—shows that “Master”’still has a conscience despite having amazing powers. But what will the increased pleasure do? Cliffhangers are fun! Keep up the fantastic work! :)
Anonymous
11/7/17, 1:08 AM
Nice! Curious to see what’s going to happen with the Jason bit, or is he permanently gone?
Anonymous
11/6/17, 11:33 PM
Hot! I love Rick's makeover.
Dec 24, 2014
nyjogger
11/6/17, 7:17 PM
I hope you write the next chapter some day and involve the younger brother.
Viridescent
11/6/17, 6:35 PM
My theory is that mike is the devil.
Anonymous
11/6/17, 5:29 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
11/6/17, 3:12 PM
I'm so glad to see you're still writing, especial when the "Coming soon" are of your website said nothing for a long while. As always, the story which is with good tempo, intrigue plot, some classical and familiar mc element, and fantastic writing skills, is another great work by talented writer Wrestlr !
JamieTi684
11/6/17, 12:39 PM
Awesome story!!!
Anonymous
11/6/17, 11:44 AM
Any chance to see the next chapter?