Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/6/17, 11:44 AM
Any chance to see the next chapter?
Anonymous
11/6/17, 11:40 AM
Thanks EdIam!
Anonymous
11/6/17, 11:25 AM
Please let Jared have a happy end...
Ray gayd
11/6/17, 9:47 AM
Great story.
Dec 24, 2014
Anonymous
11/6/17, 8:22 AM
am curious how it ends
Anonymous
11/6/17, 8:13 AM
Oufff too long ...
Anonymous
11/6/17, 7:29 AM
Halloween is over but it is still hot. A smart move to make a twist using hypnosis narrative. Wish you could introduce someone not under the influence of coach, share with readers how their plays look like from the outside and intervene. Hopefully Coach will jock him, too : )
LeadPb
11/6/17, 7:23 AM
What?! And I thought they stopped writing. It's a miracle. *mwah*
Anonymous
11/6/17, 12:23 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Anonymous
11/5/17, 9:41 PM
Can u make a picture of konnor before and after