Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/6/17, 5:29 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
11/6/17, 3:12 PM
I'm so glad to see you're still writing, especial when the "Coming soon" are of your website said nothing for a long while. As always, the story which is with good tempo, intrigue plot, some classical and familiar mc element, and fantastic writing skills, is another great work by talented writer Wrestlr !
JamieTi684
11/6/17, 12:39 PM
Awesome story!!!
Anonymous
11/6/17, 11:44 AM
Any chance to see the next chapter?
Anonymous
11/6/17, 11:40 AM
Thanks EdIam!
Anonymous
11/6/17, 11:25 AM
Please let Jared have a happy end...
Ray gayd
11/6/17, 9:47 AM
Great story.
Dec 24, 2014
Anonymous
11/6/17, 8:22 AM
am curious how it ends
Anonymous
11/6/17, 8:13 AM
Oufff too long ...
Anonymous
11/6/17, 7:29 AM
Halloween is over but it is still hot. A smart move to make a twist using hypnosis narrative. Wish you could introduce someone not under the influence of coach, share with readers how their plays look like from the outside and intervene. Hopefully Coach will jock him, too : )