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Dec 24, 2014
Anonymous
11/6/17, 8:22 AM
am curious how it ends
Anonymous
11/6/17, 8:13 AM
Oufff too long ...
Anonymous
11/6/17, 7:29 AM
Halloween is over but it is still hot. A smart move to make a twist using hypnosis narrative. Wish you could introduce someone not under the influence of coach, share with readers how their plays look like from the outside and intervene. Hopefully Coach will jock him, too : )
LeadPb
11/6/17, 7:23 AM
What?! And I thought they stopped writing. It's a miracle. *mwah*
Anonymous
11/6/17, 12:23 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Anonymous
11/5/17, 9:41 PM
Can u make a picture of konnor before and after
StoryBoi24
11/5/17, 9:18 PM
Paku I'm so sorry for missing your comment!!! Thank you! THANK YOU! :)
AeonFlux
11/5/17, 5:05 PM
What a HOT plot
Anonymous
11/5/17, 4:54 PM
I'm glad "betty" got somewhat of a happy ending, as he was my favorite....this story was great.
marcpacker
11/5/17, 4:22 PM
Awesome story with all the right TF components - please don't keep us waiting too long - - I'm wondering how that next car pulling into the lot will give us The World's Strongest Man and The Amazing Fish Boy! Great story from you both, thank you.