Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/3/17, 2:45 AM
Bruh that cliffhanger
LongtimeFan
11/3/17, 2:04 AM
Great intro! I love the mythological aspect (contemporary myth and magic is so fun). And it’s well-written and interesting, too. Can’t wait to see more! :)
UchihaDEMS
11/3/17, 1:37 AM
Moar
DD
11/3/17, 12:59 AM
I agree, this is going to be great.
MissMerboy
11/3/17, 12:56 AM
the Eric portion was extra-hot for me because not only do I love femininization transformations like that, i also have a thing for old-school greasers, seeing those two together was mind-blowing
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11/3/17, 12:40 AM
Amazing. It's refreshing to read something where nothing sinister was going on... and to read something that actually feels like a story. Good fuckin' job.
Anonymous
11/2/17, 11:32 PM
Really great start! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymous
11/2/17, 11:25 PM
Please continue
11/2/17, 10:30 PM
Gads, I've been thinking of this story all day - that's what an impression it made on me. If you ever decide to revise it, I would hope you'd make the transition/adaptation to dog more gradual. You already have nice portions where the victims start recognizing their sense of smell is heightened. As you probably know, dogs' eyesight is not great - they're colorblind (not entirely black-and-white, but more like shades of blue along with the grey spectrum). Thus they're very much dependent on smell for everything. It's not that they have no shame in sniffing genitals - it's the primary way they recognize others and places. Also, although there are wild dogs, dogs are domesticated - they are very much dependent on humans to lead them. You could amplify how dependent the new inductees become - not just in taking orders, but in wanting to be around their masters. Perhaps you'll even consider writing another story exploring how far you can go. :) Again, wonderful and very arousing story!!
11/2/17, 9:33 PM
I love this story and your writing, I hope there'll be an update soon.