Recent Comments

nyjogger4e@aol.com
10/31/17, 6:45 PM
Makes me wet every time . Thank you!
nyjogger4e@aol.com
10/31/17, 6:43 PM
Great story - I really enjoy the loss of will power and hidden memories. Fantastic!
JamieTi684
10/31/17, 10:32 AM
Amazing story! Can't wait for more!
Star.
10/31/17, 6:14 AM
Very good, intriguing, actually. I'd definitely read more, thanks.
LongtimeFan
10/31/17, 3:32 AM
What a great story! The sexy parts are awesome (especially the transformations), but what I like best, beyond how well-written it is, is the character you give the nanites. It really feels like we're seeing the world from their perspective. Plus it will be interesting to see how they develop--as the above poster said, power corrupts, but these nanites seem genuinely sweet (imagine microbots being sweet! You really are a good writer). What will happen? In short--amazing way to make an entrance! Welcome!
Jul 10, 2017
Anonymous
10/31/17, 3:10 AM
Really hot man!! Cheers!!
Anonymous
10/31/17, 2:37 AM
Loved it! Power corrupts, and he's got some serious power now. Hope to see him put it to good use!
Bazir
10/30/17, 11:51 PM
this story is awesome and really hot please continue this i would be really really good :D
Anonymous
10/30/17, 11:35 PM
yes, interesting.
Tass
10/30/17, 7:12 PM
Great Start. Can‘t wait for the direction you take the Story. Like your radikal transformation the Most.