Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/1/17, 1:07 AM
Perfect!
Anonymous
11/1/17, 12:44 AM
Yes
Anonymous
10/31/17, 10:30 PM
More please
Anonymous
10/31/17, 8:04 PM
this is what i picture little bro after the transformation http://friendlycorn.tumblr.com/image/166989289037 .
Anonymous
10/31/17, 6:49 PM
Please ignore the people who can’t handle a little light bi action in their stories... this was fun and hot :)
nyjogger4e@aol.com
10/31/17, 6:45 PM
Makes me wet every time . Thank you!
nyjogger4e@aol.com
10/31/17, 6:43 PM
Great story - I really enjoy the loss of will power and hidden memories. Fantastic!
JamieTi684
10/31/17, 10:32 AM
Amazing story! Can't wait for more!
Star.
10/31/17, 6:14 AM
Very good, intriguing, actually. I'd definitely read more, thanks.
LongtimeFan
10/31/17, 3:32 AM
What a great story! The sexy parts are awesome (especially the transformations), but what I like best, beyond how well-written it is, is the character you give the nanites. It really feels like we're seeing the world from their perspective. Plus it will be interesting to see how they develop--as the above poster said, power corrupts, but these nanites seem genuinely sweet (imagine microbots being sweet! You really are a good writer). What will happen? In short--amazing way to make an entrance! Welcome!