Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/29/17, 1:33 AM
Wonderful story, thank you!
10/28/17, 11:47 PM
Bravo, Greene. I have to admit, the sci-fi aspects didn't quite click with me, so after about chapter 5 I waited until you finished to read the entire story in single sitting. Comparing this and your previous stories, to me your unique talent is in the character descriptions. The android descriptions are nice, but when you delve into who a character is, it makes a big difference. In this story, you've conditioned the reader to understand that the perfected androids have no emotion. So when Unit 3 unexpectedly remembered that his human form had been a father to Pierre - whoa, that's a tear-jerking moment. Bravo. I think I remarked a few times in Catalyst that I admired your multi-cultural world. It's not like Star Trek or Harry Potter whether everyone is nominally and only superficially different. Here you sometimes (often?) show aspects of their characters that might stereotypically be found in the particular ethnic or racial groups. It makes the story more realistic. So again, bravo for a masterful work.
bateriam
10/28/17, 10:16 PM
Transformation descriptions as they happened were what turned me on most. Was naked and bating as I read it -- so all the better.
Cutlerfan
10/28/17, 10:00 PM
Great Story! I enjoyed it!
10/28/17, 7:52 PM
Glad you guys enjoyed it ☺ @bigguycj, hmm, not sure what you're asking about. Is that when Kirk was worshipping the two crooks? If so, then it was supposed to be Kirk talking. Hope that clears it up.
10/28/17, 7:52 PM
Glad you guys enjoyed it ☺ @bigguycj, hmm, not sure what you're asking about. Is that when Kirk was worshipping the two crooks? If so, then it was supposed to be Kirk talking. Hope that clears it up.
Anonymous
10/28/17, 6:55 PM
Hot man, thank you!
Anonymous
10/28/17, 5:17 PM
Can’t wait for what comes next :)
Anonymous
10/28/17, 4:39 PM
This is such a great story. I'm so happy you're continuing it, but did you have to end with an ultimatum between love and freedom? Fuck!!!
Anonymous
10/28/17, 3:34 PM
Good to see continuation! Decision decision.