Recent Comments

Lenny
10/29/17, 2:15 PM
Great story. Really cool how you used to custume to hide the changes. I love gender swap.
Anonymous
10/29/17, 11:14 AM
will this continue? I like this one
Anonymous
10/29/17, 9:13 AM
Great as always
Marvyn Greene
10/29/17, 3:03 AM
Thanks nycboot; getting positive feedback, especially when it is thoughtful like yours, is very motivating. The scene between Jules/Unit 3 and Pierre was one of my favourite ones to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm working on my next story now, which is going to be an historical one, set in England in the late 1940s. Ironically, given your comments above, it will be my least 'multi-cultural' story so far, I think, as the UK was not a very diverse place at the time.
Anonymous
10/29/17, 2:58 AM
please! I want to read the age-regression story most.
Biguycnj
10/29/17, 2:45 AM
Thanks for clearing that up MST guess mind was in another place . Hope u continue this
Anonymous
10/29/17, 1:33 AM
Wonderful story, thank you!
10/28/17, 11:47 PM
Bravo, Greene. I have to admit, the sci-fi aspects didn't quite click with me, so after about chapter 5 I waited until you finished to read the entire story in single sitting. Comparing this and your previous stories, to me your unique talent is in the character descriptions. The android descriptions are nice, but when you delve into who a character is, it makes a big difference. In this story, you've conditioned the reader to understand that the perfected androids have no emotion. So when Unit 3 unexpectedly remembered that his human form had been a father to Pierre - whoa, that's a tear-jerking moment. Bravo. I think I remarked a few times in Catalyst that I admired your multi-cultural world. It's not like Star Trek or Harry Potter whether everyone is nominally and only superficially different. Here you sometimes (often?) show aspects of their characters that might stereotypically be found in the particular ethnic or racial groups. It makes the story more realistic. So again, bravo for a masterful work.
bateriam
10/28/17, 10:16 PM
Transformation descriptions as they happened were what turned me on most. Was naked and bating as I read it -- so all the better.
Cutlerfan
10/28/17, 10:00 PM
Great Story! I enjoyed it!