Recent Comments

LLOYD
10/25/17, 7:29 PM
This is even more months later, but I wanted to thank you for you kind words about Deconstructed (and thanks for purchasing it - please drop me a line to the email address at the end of the book and let me know what you think). But that's just me... LLOYD I can appreciate what you say about the book not meshing up with your exact kinks, but that it hits enough of your buttons. I totally get that. I've been in the same boat many times, where there is some aspect of a story I otherwise wouldn't have liked that really appealed to me. Even though the rest totally went over my head. And I think afterwards, thank god I didn't just pass this one by. For me it's "the trap." Some hapless jock who's lost all power and control, and is caught in a situation totally beyond him. It often doesn't matter what the trap is.
screamingmoist
10/25/17, 5:19 PM
Whoa, glad to hear this one was a hit! Thanks for reading! This was a custom story and I was running out of room, but it could easily have kept going.
Anonymous
10/25/17, 4:17 PM
I'm still hard.
LanceFan2001
10/25/17, 3:46 PM
I’ve been reading TF fiction for over 20 years. In all my years I’ve never run across a story that made me come so hard. I would have liked a little more about the dumbing down. And perhaps a little more about the muscles, and make him a little more slutty. But overall, one of the hottest stories I have ever read!
skumbum
10/25/17, 1:26 PM
Oh if we’re ordering off a menu I’d like to put in an order of “controlling a bigger, more powerful guy or bully”. And an order of “any time you don’t obey, some of your size/ strength/ attractiveness/ intelligence/ other transfers to me”. Could I also get one of each of those to go?
Anonymous
10/25/17, 12:42 PM
Please say that you will be continuing this to Officer Riley's story? I want moar woof!
Nov 2, 2008
Anonymous
10/25/17, 12:31 PM
how can i like and subscribe for more? this worship is so wonderfully written, i cannot get enough!
Sep 15, 2009
Anonymous
10/25/17, 12:24 PM
so hot! would love to see this continued!
Anonymous
10/25/17, 12:03 PM
the intrigue. the places you're going. so exciting!
Anonymous
10/25/17, 11:54 AM
loved this story so much, and the universe you are creating! are these 3 places ver gonna interact? Or at they least within the same city! This is exciting in its own right! Minor thing: If each bet is 5, then 100 would be 20 chips, not 25. Also, somewhere in the story there was a repetition of "gave a gave a" I forgot where i read it. ^_^