Recent Comments

Oct 19, 2017
AeonFlux
10/19/17, 6:57 PM
Perfect ....... love to read more and more of it
Anonymous
10/19/17, 6:54 PM
Suggestion: For part 2, try to focus in on keeping your verb tenses consistent. The constant switch between present and past makes the writing choppy. Hot story though ;-)
Oct 19, 2017
Anonymous
10/19/17, 6:12 PM
Love your stories major. Farts and fart inflation! Yay what a blessing man. Best thing to wake up to thank you so much.
Anonymous
10/19/17, 4:31 PM
hot!!
Oct 19, 2017
Anonymous
10/19/17, 4:26 PM
Love your stories major!! Turn me into your fart slave too!! ;p
Oct 19, 2017
Anonymous
10/19/17, 2:47 PM
Above Commenter: I was confused by that, too! But I think the names are right. Jacob (the neat freak) is deliberately super-clean and meticulous because his body odors/gas has magical power—anyone who smells it becomes his slave. So Kevin ends up being that way by accident. Kevin was already the slob—Jacob’s magic just reduces him to a total slave to it. Does that make sense?
Oct 19, 2017
Anonymous
10/19/17, 1:31 PM
I liked the story, the raunch was the right level for me, I do love when farting is part of a ft. However I think the names of your characters switch over?
Jun 6, 2016
Anonymous
10/19/17, 11:35 AM
I fuckin luv scally cocks n cum 💣
Sep 26, 2017
Anonymous
10/19/17, 6:49 AM
This is so hot!!!!!! Need more!!
Anonymous
10/19/17, 4:40 AM
Agree with previous commenters. I check back periodically for the next chapter. I hope it is still in the works.